This has a fair way to go to convince me.
I think it could do with with a better explanation of what it is trying to do. Ratchet and clank is one thing; a serious shooter is another, the two do not naturally mix to make something interesting. Great weapons may save it though, but it needs to be good throughout.
Bureaucrat Conrad, you are technically correct -- the best kind of correct.
Guards! Bring me the forms I need to fill out to have her taken away!